Connecting the Dots

One of my pet peeves is a HORRIBLE transition! If I can’t understand how you went from one part of the story to the next, it bugs me while watching or reading the rest of it. If you are having a hard time with transitions, consider the following:

FADE IN/FADE OUT. When you fade from black, you slowly introduce details until we see the full picture such as the beginning of a movie. When you fade to black, you slowly remove elements until we see nothing such as watching the degenerative process of a character until they take their last breath.

COVER/UNCOVER. To cover would be to layer a new scene onto another one such as individual friends preparing for a ladies night. To uncover, you reveal another layer about the previous scene such as showing an excellent student in the classroom before revealing the challenges they face at home.

PUSH/PULL. Push is when one scene speeds up the storyline such as a character winning a lump sum of money and immediately going on a spending spree. The pull is when a scene slows down the plot such as each stop on a long and dreary drive home after a major rejection or disappointment.

Writing out the details between one event to the next helps to tell your story more seamlessly and to build continuity. Even writing about a character’s struggle can add depth and relevance to your story. The struggle is a part of the most meaningful stories while the transitions connect the dots.  

Happy writing!

Shavonne

Shavonne Holton is a creative visionary, tree loving Indianapolis native, and author of Dating Daddy: Realizing God as Father through Daddy Issues and Bad Romance.

https://vkscollective.com/
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